>Nowhere in the first two paragraphs do you explain what this “DoGood” is. That entirely destroys any desire to read further.
But apparently it does not destroy the desire to comment...
Honestly, it is the on web. It is simple enough to click the link and read what DoGood is about. I think your comment could be viewed as a piece of art by your broad standards, a “monologue” if you will.
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>Nowhere in the first two paragraphs do you explain what this “DoGood” is. That entirely destroys any desire to read further.
But apparently it does not destroy the desire to comment...
Honestly, it is the on web. It is simple enough to click the link and read what DoGood is about. I think your comment could be viewed as a piece of art by your broad standards, a “monologue” if you will.